Enviromental problems should be solved by the goverment isntead of individuals and private companis. To what extent do you agree o disagree?

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governments
have responsibility
responsibility
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to protect our
environments
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,
such
as biodiversity and exotic species, forest, coats and people who have to immigrate because of climate change. Personally, I believe that individuals, private
companies
and
governments
have the same obligation to care for the habitat where all of us are living. I feel
this
way for two main reasons, which I explore in the following essay.
First
of all, the
governments
have to establish environmental systems and monitor contaminants
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and implement measures to prevent air contamination, land and water.
Besides
, the leaders should be more strict with persons or
companies
who contaminate our planet with exemplary fines. The
governments
have to do different programs and strategies to combat the problem. My own experience is a compelling example of
this
. In my country, the government passed a law that cars that pass 5 years not allowed into the city because these cars are old and can contaminate.
Secondly
,
Companies
and humanity , have
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,
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water, and energy
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and with less plastic.
Furthermore
, people can adopt habits,
for example
, recycling, materials come renewable resources. In fact, society has several effects on the environment, in the
last
few years , we consume and produce more waste and impact our world,
this
product that we are finished with resources. Another thing, is
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tourism, in others words, overtourims can damage and destruction of flora habitats, animals and coats.
For instance
, when I was living in Spain , I
belongedto
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belonged to
a group that we dedicated to cleaning the beach's garbage. we liked to care about our environment. I strongly believe that all of us including
companies
and
governments
should work together to obtain a better world habitat, animals and forests don't have to suffer and
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people don't have to immigrate
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countries because don't have lands to plant or food. We have an obligation to our planet.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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