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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

#schools #force #children #language
Learning a foreign
language
 is very important and essential for everyone, especially students. But many schools
isn’t force
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 children to learn a new
language
. In my opinion, I really disagree with
this
 statement. English or other languages are
an
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 necessary element for
present
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 life.
Firstly
, they help people can communicate with many friends from
another countries
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another country
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, or people between two countries can cooperate about commercialization or make
a
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 opportunity for many
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students
syudents
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students
 to go abroad, etc….
In addition
,
know
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 a lot of foreign
language
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languages
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 can take responsibility for a
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person
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persin
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person
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 to develop themselves; have
chance
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 to get into a job easily. An employer of a company will appreciate you when you know from two
language
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languages
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 above.
This
 will make your job comfortable and have high salaries. For many reasons, schools should increasingly learn a foreign
language
. They shouldn’t stop student force to study a
language
. A new
language
open
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opens
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for
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apply
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a
students
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student's
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lots
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lot
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 of
door
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doors
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 to succeed. In conclusion, schools
are
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not only force children to learn a foreign
language
 but
also
 take responsibility for many children to study a new
language
.
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