Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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fast-moving
people
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one
time
and it is difficult to spend a lot of time
on one
particular project. Some folks believe that under such
circumstance
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circumstances
this
statement as I see several examples to manifest the truth of the opinion, such
as in the genre of arts or architecture. As such
, I will discuss these examples and conclude that I believe people
in the modern world cannot accomplish something really great due to their spending time
on too many things.
The first
clear category to justify the opinion is the area of arts. For instance
, in
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creaters
spent many months or even years Correct your spelling
creators
to complete
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completing
one
film without the help of computers or internet
. In recent years, Correct article usage
the internet
however
, a huge number of movies are produced with short intervals aiming for fast hits and actually, a lot of them are wasted. As a consequence, we see a larger number of cannons in the older era rather than the
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second
category is architecture. In this
area, in the historical era, people
built truly magnificent cathedrals, temples, castles, and forts using vast
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the vast
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periods
time
devoting a lot of human resources. As a result
, there are many Correct your spelling
historical
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Nowadays
however
, the possibility of these buildings are
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being
people
simply do not have time
to concentrate on one
project. Needless to say, modern houses and buildings are not as unique as they used to be and often time
they are destroyed and rebuilt in a
short period of intervals.
In conclusion, as discussed above, we are living in Correct article usage
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society
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a society
that
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where
people
cannot devote plenty of time
and energy to one
thing as they have various priorities. The result of this
phenomenon is the mass production of less
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architectures
can be said that they are suffering from Fix the agreement mistake
architecture
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