These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. Do advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

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Nowadays, folks change their career to another many times during their lifetime, and

also

they have more than one job to work in. There are numerous advantages and disadvantages to working in many

jobs

and changing them several times which will be discussed in the following paragraphs. As far as I am concerned the drawbacks outweigh the benefits. On the one hand, people who work in two or more

jobs

usually have no time to relax and chill out.

Moreover

, as being up to their ears there will be no chance to travel and spend their time with their friends or family. On

this

occasion, folks with low and unacceptable incomes ought to work in many careers. Sometimes the managers give them a very low amount of earnings, so they have to change their job to another which has a better income to pay their apartment rent or buy their requirements.

Also

, changing your job many times annually can make you become stressed as well as helpless.

For instance

, research by a student at the University of New South Wales has shown that a man with more than two

jobs

got anxiety and all his life was full of stress due to high payments in Sydney, whereas those ones with only a career had their pastime, and hardly ever became stressful.

On the other hand

, not only is working hard to make life easier great but with life's adventures and

also

relaxations.

For example

, working in two

jobs

can make every person independent and make them handle every hard situation in their lives.

In addition

, it's notably helpful and can increase their communication rate.

Although

it is somehow a little bit hard for introverted individuals to communicate easily with other people in society, working can help. According to what has already been discussed in the above paragraphs, there are many advantages and disadvantages to changing

jobs

and hiring in many careers, while the cons outweigh the pros.

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Prediction or recommendation

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1Word repetition
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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These days, people work in more than one job, and often change career several times during their life. Do advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Some people think government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that reading is always a good habit. Others feel it depends on which books a person is reading. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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