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Some people think that it is beneficial for students to go to private secondary schools, but others think that it has negative effects. Discuss both points of view and give your own oipnion

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Nowadays, many
families
 are sending their
children
 to private secondary
schools
. Part of
people
believe
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 that are advantages to private secondary
schools
 and
the
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second
 part of
people
 say that if you send your
children
 to private
schools
 it is not good.In
this
 ,essay we will discuss the two thoughts with examples and will give our opinion. There is a portion of
people
believe
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 that there are advantages to going to private
schools
.
First
 bors of
the
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private school
that
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gives a
high-quality
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high quality
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of
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the education because
small
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a small
the small
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 number of students
and
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can be controlled and that will reflect on the quality directly.The
second
 benefit, is that are using new and good methods in education. These advantages make some
people
 believe that private
schools
 are suitable places for their
children
. On the opposite side , some
people
 say there are negative impacts
for
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 private
schools
. The
first
 bad thing
in
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about
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 private
schools
 is much expensive and not all
people
 can send their
children
 to
the
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private
schools
. The
second
 con for private
schools
,
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are places for
the
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students who
coming
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 from rich
families
,
that
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which
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 means private
schools
 are not suitable for common
families
.Because those rich
families
 have their live standards and style of their life and that could not be acceptable for the common
families
 if their
children
 try to behave like them.
Finally
, there are positives and negatives for private
schools
 and my opinion is that private
schools
 are good for some
families
 and not good for others.
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