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Some people say that young people learn useful skills by playing electronic and computer games. Others say that young people who play electronic and computer games are wasting their time.both these views and give your own opinion.

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One
 of the most recent trends in today's world is the younger generation's desire to indulge in electronic and
computer
games
.some
people
 argue that playing
such
games
 is beneficial for youngers in learning useful
skills
, while others think it is lead to waste of time. In my ,opinion playing electronic and
computer
games
has
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 more positive impacts than negative on young
people
. In
this
 ,
an
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essay I will discuss both sides of the argument in detail along with my personal preference. On
one
 hand, critics may point out that,
one
 of the most significant drawbacks of playing electronic and
computer
games
 is that it wastes time for young
people
. And
also
 affects their physical health.
For example
, some of the youngest
people
 are used to playing
games
 all night alone. It can lead to many health problems if it is consumed daily. It was like eyesight became weak.
Also
 sometimes mental problems. On the other ,hand there are a number of arguments in favour of my knowledge.
One
 of the most preponderant ones is that improving younger
people
 problem solving and critical-thinking
skills
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 positive consequences for teenagers in various ways.
For instance
, they improve multi-tasking
skills
, grow children's critical thinking
skills
, and develop creativity and
also
 develop eye-hand coordination. According to my knowledge ,some children like to choose a more and more difficult level in the
games
 and try to solve the puzzles.it improves the ability to solve mathematical problems. It develops their critical thinking range. To sum up, there are both advantages and disadvantages to
computer
games
 and it seems that parents need to monitor when their children use mobile phones or electronic devices. And give them limited time to play the
games
. As well as parents can control it from becoming an addition, the game is all right.
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