In many countries woman no longer feel the need to get married. Some people believe that this is because women are able to earn their own income and therefore do not require financial security that marriage can bring. To what extend do you agree?
In too many nations a survey conducted by the university of chico in INDIA found that in the areas where more single
women
tend not to enter into the marriage
relationship
. Some people argue that since they are earning their own living hood thus
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financial independence is believed to be the main source of Correct article usage
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marriage
. I completely disagree with the notion, I am going to elaborate following paragraphs.
I believe that marriage
is not only about money or security, but also
relationships and the best way to bring the next
generation alive. if women
do not get married, there is no way mankind can sustain in
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this
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women
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marriage
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marriage
relationship
is always beneficial to mankind.
Another moot point of why women
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next
generations. When women
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