Prevention is better than cure. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree.
Nowadays, several kinds of
health
issues are extremely common and a number of communities believe that doing research as well as treatment for these diseases needs a huge amount of money
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it will save huge cost that is
used to spend on the cure. I completely agree with that opinion and this
essay will show the economic point of view of a country and the health
aspects of people
.
To commence with, there are many health
centres and also
a lot
of medical colleges where government invest a lot
of money
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people
. If government should invest that money
in spreading the reasons and the obstacles people
faced because of illness that will be much more helpful for people
to understand. For instance
, if government spreads the
information about several kinds of diseases because of having a Correct article usage
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lot
of cigarettes or alcohol then
many people
will get aware of this
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some will stop that.
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Secondly
, individuals are recently a bit aware of health
issues in that case if people
do a lot
of exercises
and by maintaining a healthy diet it is Fix the agreement mistake
exercise
also
possible to become less ill. For example
, an athlete doesn’t get sick as quickly like as a normal human being, because they always do regular exercise and they try to eat healthy food regularly. Moreover
, they should try to avoid alcohol and that is
the main reason behind becoming healthy. Normal human beings should try to follow them.
To conclude, governments should spread money
on health
-related education by providing information to citizens about the disadvantages of diseases and people
should take care of their health
to make them fit.Submitted by koly2751 on
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