You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the

use

of the

community

hall

for our

music

group. We are a group of three award-winning classical musicians including one violinist and two concert pianists. We meet weekly on Tuesday and Friday evenings to

practice

classical

music

pieces from Chopin and Mozart in the

community

hall

. Recently the

community

hall

staff

have

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informed us that we could no longer

use

the

hall

on these evenings, citing the need to

use

the

hall

space for other

community

events. While we understand a variety of groups are competing for the

use

of the

hall

, we believe that having our group

practice

in the

hall

could greatly benefit the

community

. Classical

music

is extremely powerful in bringing people together and in curating a sense of

community

.

In addition

, numerous neuroscience studies have shown that exposure to classical

music

can enhance

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cognitive development in children. In exchange for the continuous

use

of the

community

hall

, we are happy to periodically turn our

practice

sessions into open rehearsals that

community

members can join free of charge. We are of course open to

adjust

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the days and times for our

practice

. We can do

anytime

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between 1 pm and 5:30 pm on weekdays. Kindly suggest which days and times would work

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best given the current availability of the

community

hall

. We look forward to hearing from you. Please feel free to reach out should you have additional questions. Best regards,

Ruoyao

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Royal