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Today more and more tourist or visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantages and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

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Tourism has been for a long time one of the most pleasant leisure activities. Nowadays many
tourists
 are
traveling
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 to
places
 with extreme conditions.
This
 essay will discuss the pros and cons
for
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tourists
 visiting
such
places
. The main benefit of it being
a
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one
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lifetime
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life time
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 experience, something extraordinary, spending a holiday away from the usual pattern of booking a room in a five stars hotel or going on a safari or hiking or sightseeing,
eventually
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tourists
 will be fed up
from
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this
 traditional way of tourism and start looking for something new and exciting, a journey to Antarctic or
places
 where conditions are inconvenient would be intriguing for
tourists
 with
advanterous
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adventurous
 spirit, for them it would be an opportunity for growth, learning new survival skills and adapting to inconvenient conditions, an
expercience
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experience
 that they will remember forever, a story they would tell to their grandchildren. -the obvious drawback
for
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this
 kind of tourism is the lack of safety means and essential facilities, being out there in the middle of the desert, even if the
tourists
 are accompanied
with
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 security guards and have all the medical supplements, at any given moment, the situation could get out of control,
for
instance
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 a tourist will be sick, or suddenly a
strom
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storm
Strom
belows
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below
, some wild animals appear, and in the
last
 few years there were several reports on missing
tourists
 who visited
such
places
, so the dangerous side of
such
 activities is obvious. -To conclude, the definite advantage for
tourist
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tourists
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 who
visit
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such
 regions is the thrill of one
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lifetime
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life time
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adventure
advanture
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adventure
,
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whereas
wheras
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whereas
 the drawback of it is the deficiency of means of security.
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