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Because computers can translate all languages very quickly and accurately, learning a foreign language is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #language #waste #time
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rapid
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 and vast development in recent years, it could not be an appropriate replacement for all human needs. There are several reasons why a group of
people
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 believe that learning foreign languages is still an essential need for everyone. Computers can easily handle lots of difficulties, but they are not perfect tools for communicative targets
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, working, etc.
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, learning a foreign
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 gives you the chance to find a decent job in an international company. For working in
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 places, where communicate with well-known companies all over the world, a computer translation wouldn't be beneficial since you should cope with others online or on the phone.
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, in the working
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 you will miss the chance of sharing your ideas with others.
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,
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 translations are not accurate enough.
People
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 of different cultures usually have some slang or idioms that are known among the
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 of that culture and they are not recognized by the machine easily. If someone uses the exact translation
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 done by the computers,
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 will lead to some misunderstandings.
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, Achievements of scientific
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 support the fact that learning a new
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 can be beneficial for
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human's
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 brain. To sums up,
people
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 can use computer translations without spending time and money to learn the
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 but
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 cannot be beneficial in all situations. In order to communicate better, it is essential to be familiar with the
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