You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are part of a group of musicians who meet on Tuesday and Friday evenings to practise in the community hall. You have been told, however, that it is no longer possible for the group to use the hall. Write a letter to the manager. In the letter: • describe what the group does • explain why the group is good for the community • suggest alternative days and times for practice You should write at least 150 words.
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Dear Mr Walia,
I am one of the musicians who practise in your community hall on Tuesday and Friday evenings with my group. We came to know that we will not be allowed to use the hall for our rehearsals anymore. I am writing
this
letter to let you know that our group is wholly dependent upon your place for its rehearsals. Ours is a band of 20 people who not only play music but also
teach ethics and moral values to children by means of our sound systems.
With the help of our songs and instruments, we promote unity and cultural values in youngsters and we have also
won awards due to this
speciality. Therefore
, we not only perform but also
gives a message to the community through our dramas and events. My whole team is working hard for the welfare of people and society.
Therefore
, I request you please allow us to do the practice sessions in your area. If there is any major reason, we are happy to change our timings or we could use your hall for any other two days in a week instead
of Tuesdays and Fridays.
Looking forward to hearing from you in affirmative.
Yours faithfully,
AmayraSubmitted by cashreya2675 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite