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These days Internet –based courses have become a popular alternative to University – based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argue that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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Having become an essential part of educational routine
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 are gaining popularity nowadays.
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, the idea of using
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 in
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 is embraced not by everyone. In
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 both views are discussed and the author’s opinion is given.
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 as a positive trend in
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, attending classes or submitting assessments without commuting is rather comfortable, which could be hardly possible without
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, - especially for disabled people or remote areas.
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, online libraries, search engines, and encyclopedias have become available thanks to
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,
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 make educators more accessible
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 students.
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,
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 can negatively affect the
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 workflow and participants. The
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 negative outcome seems to be
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 health troubles as poor vision, back troubles or even cyber addiction developed by students after years spent in front of the screen. The
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 problem is learners’ non-ability to comprehend,
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think critically and independently, relying on multiple opinions given. Drawing a conclusion, I would like to express my opinion on whether
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 influence
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 positively or negatively. I am absolutely convinced that
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faster, more comfortable and more efficient learning.
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