You are looking for part-time work. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter introduce yourself say what skills and work experience you have explain the sort of job you are looking for You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in a part-time job opportunity at your noble organisation. I graduated from the University of Ibadan where I studied Entrepreneurship Education and will be going for my NYSC program by

year.

hence

, my reason for seeking

this

vacancy. Prior to my University degree, I had knowledge of pattern drafting in fashion designing for 2 years which I know is an imperative skill for the success of your business in order to give effective value to students learning and training about cloth making.

Moreover

, my experience in the fashion industry gives me a hedge to act as a facilitator in your skill acquisition centre because I have been a life coach and model for some of my online students.

However

, I can only be free three times a week due to other commitments I have which is the more reason I am opting for a short-term contract. I will be glad if you can give me room to prove my knowledge and skill in making outstanding outfits. Yours faithfully, Folakemi.

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