Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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it is sometimes thought that,the

earth

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is being damaged by human work, other feel that individuals make the world for

better

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living.In my opinion,I feel that human

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is one of the main reasons

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damage the

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.

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with,there are numerous reasons to

damaged

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the

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and which are being by individual activities.We live

in

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a

plant

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planet

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and if the

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is polluted by us we cannot live

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doing

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different types of work which are harmful

for

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to

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earth

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the earth

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.There

are

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so many

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activity

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activities

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such

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as deforestation.Man cutting down all trees

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there is less greenery and oxygen level of air is decreased.If

this

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activity

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are continue

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by human it is dangerous for us.A recent survey

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that

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human

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humans

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are the main culprit who

damage

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our

forest

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.

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,human

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doing

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so many activities which is beneficial for

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earth

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.There are different types of steps are taken by

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an individual

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individual

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that essential for our

planet

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.

Human

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try to preserve different

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species which are crucial for our world.In these

case

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human

hunam

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human

activity

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make our

planet

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better Individual

planting

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more and more new trees

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air pollution

is

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level decrease.

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example

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some volunteers take various steps to protect our

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. In conclusion,while people may very their opinion, I think that there

are

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so many harmful

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activity

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activities

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which are

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done

doing

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done

by

human

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and

than

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damaged our environment.