You are in a hospital with a broken leg. Your colleagues have sent you get well soon greeting cards and gifts. Write a letter to them and include: Thank them for everything Explain how you spend time in the hospital Inform them about your recovery process

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Dear colleagues. Thanks a lot for showering gratitude amidst your tight schedule. I feel blessed. I am really happy for all of you. To be honest, I forgot my all injuries, due to your care and affection. It gives motivates me. In

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way, I want to be with all of you. So it is quite boring at the hospital. And almost every day is the same. In the morning, the expert and nurse came to my room. And

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they check if I have taken the pills. In the middle of the day, I can watch something on the television like TV shows, movies or different news.

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, these days are given the opportunity raise to awareness for me. During the day, I read a number of books. In the afternoons, I have a nap.

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, the doctor for the evening for checking my health. I tried to befriend the nurse, and sometimes when I feel tedious, I talk with the nurse late.

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I fall asleep. Thank genuine trauma in my leg, the doctor said that I should pay serious attention to my leg for a long time. So, the doctor has advised me not to strain the leg. I have to follow up with physiotherapy. It will take about 6 or 7 weeks for a complete recovery. Look forward to seeing you. Best regards. Lucy.

uluga2002Fri Nov 18 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

228 words

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You are in a hospital with a broken leg. Your colleagues have sent you get well soon greeting cards and gifts. Write a letter to them and include: Thank them for everything Explain how you spend time in the hospital Inform them about your recovery process

Children find it difficult to pay attention or concentrate on school study what are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea while others disagree strongly with. Consider both sides of this debates and present your own idea. You should give reasons for your answer and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience

Many people these days change career throughout their working life. What are the main reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development for them personally and for the society as a whole?

Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arys and this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree or disgree?

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