Write about the following topic. Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

World

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has

many

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a many

the many

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number of

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apply

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recognized

organizations

and companies.They have many

employees

under

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in

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their companies.Out of

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,them

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them

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the

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many

organizations

serve to people any service or

selling

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sell

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to them any services.We can describe

organizations

as

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government

govermant

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government

and private sectors. Many

organizations

introduce smart

dress

code

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codes

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for their

employees

.

On the other

hand

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some

organizations

dont

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don't

care about

employers

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employers'

employer's

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dress

code

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codes

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and they only care about

quality

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the quality

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of work

in

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of

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their

employees

.In my

opinion

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,opinion

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if when we work as

a

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an

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employer in

organization

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an organization

the organization

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or a company we must need our unique things to show we are working under them.It may be a

dress

,a badge or an ID.In Sri

Lanka

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,Lanka

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many

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government

govermant

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government

organizations

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believe

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belive

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believe

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that their

employees

should wear

smartly

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smart

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.Saree for

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women

womans

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women

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and office suits for gents

are

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is

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the

dress

code

in

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government

govermant

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government

sectors. When we talk about the other side only smart

dress

code

cant get profits ,

feedbacks

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feedback

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for

organization

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the organization

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and giving

the

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apply

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good service to the people.When we

going

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to a private bank they are giving us good service and introduce more facilities to their customers

more

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apply

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than

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government

govermant

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government

banks.But

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government

govermant

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government

bank

employees

dress

smartly more than private bank

employees

.In private

hospitals

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,hospitals

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they cared about their patients more than

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government

govermant

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government

hospital

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hospitals

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careing

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caring

about their

patient

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patients

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.

Otherwise

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,Otherwise

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private hospital workers

dress

smartly more than

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government

govermant

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government

hospital

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workers

wokers

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workers

. So, after the all

examples

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we can conclude only smart

dress

code

cant

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can't

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get

success

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successful

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for their

organization

or company.They must need

employees

with quality

of

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apply

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works

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work

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and

dress

smartly to

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achieve

achive

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achieve

success,

getting

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get

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profits

profis

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profit

for their

organization

and supply good services to the people.