Some people think that there should be some strict controls about noise. Others think that they could just make as much noise as they want. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some would argue that there should be severe
regulations
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about
noise
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pollution, while others say that they must be allowed to make the
noise
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they desired. While some
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people
poeple
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people
believe they have the
right
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to make strong sounds as much as they want, I believe there should be stronger
regulations
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to monitor the
amount
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of
noise
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people
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are producing. On the one hand, many citizens think they have the
right
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of yelling and
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loud
music
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during the
day
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because they wanted or like it.
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, some
people
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feel excited by hearing loud hi-hop
music
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and they do not care about time or others
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neighbours
that might be
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by
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noise
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.
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, these individuals believe that having a house
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them the
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to do and hear wherever they want.
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, In
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Angeles California most of the
people
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are coming from Latino Community that like to hear really loud
music
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during the
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, and sometimes the police department
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not attend these calls to give them some
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.
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, I believe
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should not be
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way because there are a lot of
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who work
night
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shift, and they really need to rest at home.
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, some individuals strongly believe there should be stronger
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on controlling the amount of
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a person
make
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during the
day
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and night because
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is
people
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's
right
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.
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, it is vital to have a pleasant rest at night and during the
day
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because there are many children who need to study and they need to focus on
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assignments
assigments
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assignments
.
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, it is well-known that keeping
low
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level of
noise
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help to improve
people
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's mental health. To explain
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, in Anaheim high-heels California, there are strict
regulations
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for society who live there, and they must follow a schedule
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9:00 am to 7:00 pm that allows them to hear moderate volume
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, and outside
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period of time, they are not allowed to produce any
noise
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. I believe
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is apreferable way of living because they have control of
noise
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pollution, and
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allow them to have peace at home.
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so many citizens believe they can produce the
noise
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they want, I believe they should be stronger
regulations
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to control the amount of
noise
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a person can make because
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directly affect
people
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's performance.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • noise levels
  • stress
  • disturb sleep
  • imposing legal restrictions
  • peaceful living environment
  • tolerance levels
  • personal freedom
  • business operations
  • designated quiet zones
  • commercial and industrial zones
  • urban areas
  • public awareness campaigns
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