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Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #criminals #prison #education #job
There is a school of thought that jailing
criminals
 in
prison
does
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 not have many positive
effect
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effects
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.
Instead
 of that, they should attend education and
job
 training courses. Personally, I would argue against
this
 idea since without being punished bad people will not know what they have done is not allowed. There are compelling reasons
as to
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why sending
criminals
into
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 jail is a good idea regarding making them
to
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apologize for their faults and reducing the rate of bad
behavior
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 in society. Regarding the former, people must have
their
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responsibility for what they have done. In fact, if a bad person is released without punishment, they tend to replay what they have done. With respect to the latter, keeping
criminals
 in
prison
 is the best way to protect citizens from them. For that reason, the criminal rate will be lowered and residents do not have to worry about their safety.
However
, I am
also
 convinced that education and
job
 training should
also
 be used in
prison
 concerning the rise in
workforce
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 and giving people a chance to remake their life. For one,
prison
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prisons
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 should include educating programs for
criminals
 and
teaching
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 them
simple
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job
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jobs
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.
This
,
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 can improve the number of workforces in heavy work.
In addition
, when the punishment period ends, prisoners will have theories and experience in doing what they have been taught.
Moreover
, they can have opportunities to rejoin
with
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the
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society. In conclusion, while there are justifications for
criminals
 that they should be educated and trained
some
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job
instead
 of sending to
prison
, I would contend that both of these should be used to produce the most effective way.
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