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Despite a variety of sport facilities and gyms, people are less fit nowadays than ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

#variety #sport #facilities #gyms #people
Although
 nowadays there are a lot of
sport
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facilities
facilieties
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facilities
 and easily accessible gyms, the majority of people are less fit than in the past decades. Below I will discuss my point of view, which is the different
type
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types
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 of cuisine that we are consuming.
To begin
 with,
overweight
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being overweight
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 and
fitness
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having fitness
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 problems are always associated with unhealthy meals which affect our
body
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bodies
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with
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a
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bad shape. To be more precise eating
a fast
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fast food
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food
 after doing
a gym activities
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gym activities
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 is a common practice nowadays, but unfortunately is a reason
that
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of
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 poor health
condition
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conditions
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.
In addition
 to eating rubbish
food
,
the
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busy life of folks
are
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 spending more time on work for firms rather than looking at their body shape.
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, work hours nowadays are consuming almost half of the day which
mean
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means
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 that the time
that is
 dedicated to enhancing body
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strength
stength
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strength
 or
loss
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 some weight is not enough.
On the other
hand
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 there are many ways to tackle
this
 issue in my view, the important ones are; more regulation
on
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of
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 the fast
food
 industry and
encourage
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encouraging
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 individuals to involve in
sport
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sports
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 activities. In
term
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terms
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 of regulation: governments must take serious
measurements
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 to reduce the number of fast
food
establishment
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establishments
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 as well as
imposing
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impose
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 more taxes for both producers and buyers.
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, low prices of unhealthy meals are the main reason for the high demand on it so, if the prices go up, the demand is going to decline immediately.
Furthermore
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 we should motivate people to
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participate
partecipate
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participate
 in gyms and other physical places. In conclusion, the widespread of unhealthy meal providers
in addition
 to our busy lifestyle nowadays are the major causes of
abandon
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 physical facilities.
However
, the most effective solution
are
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is
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 to practice more control over unhealthy manufactories at the same time
with
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 encouraging individuals to do some activities.
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