The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two diagrams illustrate the difference between Grange Park on its
first
day in 1920 and nowadays showing the new developments, and changes. It's clear that the Rose
garden
and seats which was on Elson street's side are removed. Above it was the stage for musicians which is replaced recently by an amphitheatre for concerts with a semi-circle structure. All the seats around
this
area are removed.
However
, the other rose
garden
on Arnold avenue's side is still as it is. Moving on To the fountain in the centre of the park, It is now substituted by a large rose
garden
in a square shape, surrounded by seats from its four sides. The glasshouse on your right after entering from Eldon street's entrance was removed,
Instead
, you can see a Water feature in the same place.
Besides
, adding a new entrance on the same side for those coming from the underground car park. We can
also
see that, There is now a big children's play area in the same place as the old pond for water plants. Accompanied by removing the neighbouring old rose
garden
and opening a new cafe in its place.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alterations
  • renovations
  • modernize
  • upgraded
  • transformed
  • landscaping
  • facilities
  • amenities
  • preservation
  • heritage
  • green spaces
  • eco-friendly
  • public space
  • community impact
  • historical elements
  • conservation
  • recreational areas
  • urban planning
  • sustainable development
  • layout
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