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Intro. Contemporary automotive technology is elaborating at
such
a fast pace, that it started too difficult to predict what awaits us in
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nearest future and decades.
This
is an exciting time for imagination and experimentation. The largest automakers taking risks and making bold experiments by pushing technological limits, meantime generating innovations, which might be mainstream in the foreseeable future and establish the
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beginning
beggining
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beginning
of a new era in the automobile industry. In
this
video you will find a review of the most trending and awaited concept cars, that will roll off the line in the
next
few years. Top speed, here we go! CARS: 1.Auto Giant BMW
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unveiled an
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inveiled
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and updated version of its electric off-road
car
IX. The
car
can change its
color
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from black to white, in order to comply with
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mood and save
electroenergy
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electro energy
electron energy
. The concept
car
, which
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IX FLOW,
introduced
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in
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wrapped
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digital paper. These cars are able
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change
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chance
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their
colors
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by smooth motion - under the action of electrical
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.
This
function helps to
driver
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to adapt the auto based on personal style or weather.
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digital technology advancement demonstrates boundless potential in terms of exterior personalization.
This
model can be
break-through
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innovation in the near future. 2.
This
is a vivid embodiment of KIA’s desire to move forward in a world of electrification. “KIA IMAGINE” is the
first
full electrical four-door
car
, designed expressively with unusual shapes and its 21-inch screen in its control panel.
This
model combines characteristics of
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SUV,
elegant
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sporty family sedan, and in the meantime,
spacious
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crossover. The concept’s portrait combines visual tension and
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line’s
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purity. The body of the
car
covered
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with 6 layers of silver paint which includes
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effect and bronze shade. 3.
Audi
supplements three perspective concepts with its final link called
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sphere”. Generally, the design of
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“Urban sphere” is not planning to be the biggest revelation.
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to its external design, the idea behind
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novelty of
this
modern
car
,
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is to provide
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inner comfort. As well as 2 other concepts of
this
series,
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“Urban sphere” use an electric transmission and a new generation of
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systems. Based on its autonomous technologies of
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generation,
this
minivan automatically can hide
steering
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wheel, pedals and instrument panel during autopilot’s operation. “Urban sphere” is based on
Audi
Premium Platform Electric (PPE), in which
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kW battery is located between axis.
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reserve is 750 km
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one full charge. It is possible to charge Minivan from 5% to 80% within 25 minutes.
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