Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent you agree or disagree to this statement ?

It is a common belief among the public that the authorities should invest more

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

railways compared to the road network.

Although

there are pros and cons

in

Change preposition

to

show examples

both modes of

transports

Fix the agreement mistake

transport

show examples

, I strongly agree with

this

statement. The railways should receive

a

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

priority for a number of reasons.

Firstly

, it is a mode of mass

transport

,

hence

it boosts the efficacy of

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

transport

in a country.

Moreover

, trains are well known for

rapid

Correct article usage

the rapid

show examples

transportation of passengers and goods, saving valuable time

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

the

service

users.

For example

, the Bullet train in Japan can hit a speed limit of 600 kilometres per hour, which is not possible to achieve in any of the methods using roads.

In addition

, most modern trains are environment friendly because it utilises electricity rather than burning fossil fuel as

its

Correct pronoun usage

their

show examples

source of energy.

Therefore

, it is obvious that

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

locomotives are a fast and clean

method

of

transport

that should get

a

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

priority over others.

On the other hand

,

transport

services using road

network

Fix the agreement mistake

networks

show examples

have their own benefits.

Firstly

,

this

method

provides access to all parts of the country as train

service

cannot practically cover every corner due to the cost and geographical challenges.

Similarly

,

this

method

does not depend on a schedule compared to the train

service

.

Therefore

, it provides more liberty for the

service

users

unlike

Add the comma(s)

,unlike

show examples

the former

method

.

For instance

, an individual can use his own car whenever he needs to fulfil his

transport

requirements

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

if the government invests more

on

Change preposition

in

show examples

roads.

However

, these benefits do not outweigh the advantages of a proper railway network. In conclusion, developing a railway system is more beneficial for a country in many aspects rather than investing

large

Change the article

a large

show examples

amount

Fix the agreement mistake

amounts

show examples

of money on roads. Authorities should reserve a significant proportion of their budgets to develop it in future.