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The plans show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The diagrams illustrate what the southwest airport looks like now and it will change within a year after reconstruction. Overall, as the building will be expanded and developed, there will be constructed more facilities in order to make passenger service better
next
 year. As it is shown in the plans, now on the site of departures there is a given cafe for passengers which is located on the left side of the map, whereas the check-in area is built opposite it. Straight ahead there can be seen security passport control and passport control customs. At the top of it , there are eight gates and two walkways which will be enlarged and replaced in the future. After the renovation works are completed, amenities like a shop will be on the way of sky trains that should be replacing walkways at
this
 moment. There will be built bag drops in the area of departures taking the place of the old check-in point opposite them. While the cafe in the departure hall will be moved to the entrances. Passengers
also
 notice that the section of arrivals cafe and atm machines will be added to the northern part of the illustration.
In addition
, car hires will be included for arriving ones to use them which the airport doesn't have nowadays. One of the major changes will be expanded gates from eight to eighteen within twelve months.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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