Some young people like to copy the behaviour and clothes of famous people today.

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Some youths are intent to behave
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as famous
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, and sometimes they wear like them.
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happens because
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the effect on these individuals is too much on
people
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’s lives.
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, it can lead to some problems
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as fanaticism. Hollywood has a great impact
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people
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lifestyle
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in today’s world.
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, individuals, especially young ones want to dress and behave like film stars.
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, if they like a character in a film or serial, they are ready to buy
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the costume
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of
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this
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character.
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,
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like to act famous
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such
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as
footballer
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, NBA players or musicians.
Young
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generation would like to possess
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the same
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abilities
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these
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and for achieving
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they might think that they do
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things and wear clothes like them.
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to see
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people
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as
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an idol
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idol
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and trying to get achievements like them are good, sometimes it can lead to some problems
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as fanaticism. Fanaticism might cause serious personality issues.
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should accept that each person has different personalities and qualities,
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why
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they could not be
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the same
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as those
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.
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reason is that there would be some conflicts among
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who are
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a fan
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fan
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fans
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of
two
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the two
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celebrities. The young could be so
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about these
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whom they love. In conclusion,
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the young
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generation
love
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to look like celebrities, because nowadays films, sports,
music
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and music
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have
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big impact
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their lives.
However
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, to be
fan
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a fan
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of somebody might be harmful sometimes
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