Some youths are intent to behave
as famous
, and sometimes they wear like them.
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the effect on these individuals is too much on
’s lives.
, it can lead to some problems
as fanaticism.
Hollywood has a great impact
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in today’s world.
, individuals, especially young ones want to dress and behave like film stars.
, if they like a character in a film or serial, they are ready to buy
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character.
,
like to act famous
as
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, NBA players or musicians.
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generation would like to possess
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abilities
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these
and for achieving
they might think that they do
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things and wear clothes like them.
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as
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and trying to get achievements like them are good, sometimes it can lead to some problems
as fanaticism. Fanaticism might cause serious personality issues.
should accept that each person has different personalities and qualities,
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why
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they could not be
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as those
.
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reason is that there would be some conflicts among
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of
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celebrities. The young could be so
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about these
whom they love.
In conclusion,
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generation
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to look like celebrities, because nowadays films, sports,
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have
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big impact
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their lives.
, to be
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of somebody might be harmful sometimes