Q:- Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban countries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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individuals assume that it would be better for big

companies

and

industry

to move to village

areas

outside

biggest

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town

centre.

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essay will argue that the amenities of

this

trend outweigh the drawbacks. It will

then

demonstrate the biggest benefits of

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, followed by an analysis of how the primary demerit is not entirely valid. On the one hand, there is no argument regarding the fact that

after

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building large

company

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companies

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and

industry

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industries

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to

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countryside

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the countryside

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,

that

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will be better for

masses

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and nations.

That is

to say, in village

areas

to fabricate

industry

and

companies

economically backwards multitudes get chance to do work and the individuals lead

happy

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life.

Moreover

, we are residing in a contemporary world where new school individuals feel after moving to

company

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a company

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and

industry

from

urban

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the urban

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sides

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, that will be better for

town

sides peoples.

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,

town

areas

will be tidy and get

chance

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removing

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environmental

polluted

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.

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, The New York Times reported on 25 march 2019 and found that approximately 86

percent

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multitudes

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of multitudes

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believed

beleived

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believed

they will live

comfortable

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for

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moving

industry

regional

areas

.

On the other hand

, those opposed to

this

say that it causes adverse

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ramifications

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on the biggest reasons

of

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industry

and

companies

stay in

town

areas

are getting more and more polluted.What I mean to say,

nowadays

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in

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our society

get

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much polluted for some

companies

and industries and people suffer

asthma

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for

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industries.If

companies

and

industry

take

decision

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the decision

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to move to village sides, it will be beneficial for multitudes.

However

, there is no actual evidence to support

this

viewpoint. In conclusion,

this

essay discussed the major conveniences of the

situations

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and

also

stated how it clearly outweighs the flawed argument of conveniences.