Young people learn learn more about good behaviour from books or films/ movies than they learn from real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Good manners have attracted ever-increasing public concerns in many countries. Whether these manners are learned more from books or films/ movies or real-life
experiences
is a controversial issue. In
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writing, I entirely disagree for the reasons below. On the one hand, it is obvious for us to recognize that good
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is formed more from real-life
experiences
instead
of literature publishers. Young people, in their childhood,
for instance
, did not have enough awareness to understand entirely messages about good behaviors from literature;
therefore
, their parents set a good example with a view to developing good
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.
As a result
, they are capable of learning how to behave better.
On the other hand
, real-life
experiences
are not only the foundation but
also
reality. Unlike books or films/movies, real-life
experiences
are much more practical
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most cases, teachings on literature are quite abstract so young people have
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difficulty in absorbing and
practicing
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in real situations.
Therefore
, Were it not for
experiences
from life, young guys could not understand the whole messages that publishers want to
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. In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that learning good
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from real-life
experiences
is much more efficient and preferable
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the young generation.
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