Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources such as forests animals or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples your support your opinion.

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contemprary
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era, there are so many natural gifts for living better. like
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a
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common knowledge that most part of the earth is
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by
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. while
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scarcity
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the scarcity
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of drinking
water
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water
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Water
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but
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of our bodies consist of
water
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that 97percent of
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waters
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is salty so there
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3
percent
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drink
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left over. In most countries
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especially
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developing and developing countries
water
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consumption
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consumption
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a
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wrong way and most of the clean
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wasted
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.Based on recent reports
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published by
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university 60
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of countries will
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deferentially
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water
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crisis in 2080.Due to the
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explosion
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it would be no drop of clean
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for
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future
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.That means, there will be no
water
to drink and crop cultivation.
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,
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without
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without
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productions
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it might
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animal husbandry concequancely, no
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meat
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meet
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or
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dairy
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no
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vegetables
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vegetables
for
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needs. It is unbelievable being alive
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without
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without
any food
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water
. In conclusion, in view of
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outlined above, it can conclude that people must be informed about
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the importance
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of
water
role in
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all aspects of
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life
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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