Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and measures are required.

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of Yemen and Italy, which

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divided into groups by

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, in 2000 and projections for 2050. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that in both countries the

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in almost all

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groups will show similar tendencies, except for the group that includes

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aged from 15 to 59. More precisely, pie charts about Yemen show that the

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0 to 14 will noticeably decrease from 50,1% to 37%.

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aged from 15 to 59 and from 60 and older will rise by 11% and 2,1% respectively. Pie charts about Italy illustrate that

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aged from 15 to 59 will have a significant drop by 15%. The

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of 60 and above will almost double, finishing at 42,3%. And

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but not least the

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aged from 0 to 14 will only marginally decline by 2,8%. Overall, over the period from 2000 to 2050 in both

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there are not going to be drastic changes in the numbers of

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in different

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