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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advanatages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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Actually,
boys
 under ten years old are overstimulated, because they have different teaching and learning methods. Across the globe rise a new tendency that
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 they can achieve anything in their lives if work hard. Initiating the benefits of the same should be more positive will be the children in school age, so in the
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future they can believe in
herself
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 and grow their
skills
. Normally loving parents want to support their sons throughout whole their lives but that idea is virtually impossible.
However
, that support becomes an advantage in the middle childhood years above all in adolescence. Is a fact,
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 sharing new
skills
 among young
boys
 in school, house, and sports, is the best way to improve their ability to get successful results in adult life.
In contrast
, some disadvantages are many families around the world start to get less support for their
boys
,
consequently
 an overload of positive ideas that will make them dreamers
boys
 without knowledge of the challenge of life.
For instance
, send
boys
 to schools or military academies when hard work and real-life experiences will make them stronger persons. ,
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 the children should make their own experience over
practice
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learning
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 way,
for example
 in farms, factories,
workshops
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. To conclude, the balance between a good couch and practice
skills
 in the works field
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 will be a great reason why the future generations grow on heavy-duty behaviour and improve their soft
skills
in
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 all levels. While society preserves good quality education system that idea makes
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oflot
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lot
 sense in all classes.
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