Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents fault others says that schools are to be blamed. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present there is a serious debate among

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society on the standard of

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's behaviour where it seems day by day, it becomes poorer. Some call

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a fault of their

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while others load the responsible on their

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.

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essay will discuss these both views. The

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of

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are their

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. Soon after birth,

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start to learn a lot of things in the

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few years of their

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at home which will be the foundation of their entire

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what is taught and learnt by

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at some play a vital role in

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's

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. Eventually, these learnings have a severe impact on the standard of their ultimate behaviour. As an example, it's

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duty to teach their

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how to behave in a place according to the situation and nature, and

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should be role models

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it.

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contributions can develop a child's behavioural patterns from the outset.

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, there is a bigger and more important role to play by the

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as well. Once

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are enrolled

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schools at the ages of 5 or 6, they become part of a society or

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are introduced to a new community where it is totally strange to them. So it is

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' duty to educate

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on great qualities

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as patience, love, sharing, respect and helping etc which

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might not get a chance to learn at home.

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, those experiences will help

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to shape their

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in a quality manner. In summary, today it is common to see many

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the standard of behaviour of

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in public. While many blame

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for

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nature, there is a significant portion of society thinks the fault is on

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at schools. I believe

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is a responsibility of both parties where

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should teach better manners from

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birth at home while

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should

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develop it once they become part of the school culture. There should not be a boundary between the two stages

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but should continue throughout life in a collaborative manner to see better outcomes.