Some say that the standard of behavior among children has worsened and that this is their parents fault others says that schools are to be blamed. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

At present there is a serious debate among

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society on the standard of

children

's behaviour where it seems day by day, it becomes poorer. Some call

this

a fault of their

parents

while others load the responsible on their

teachers

.

This

essay will discuss these both views. The

first

teachers

of

children

are their

parents

. Soon after birth,

kids

start to learn a lot of things in the

first

few years of their

lives

at home which will be the foundation of their entire

lives

.

Hence

what is taught and learnt by

parents

at some play a vital role in

children

's

lives

. Eventually, these learnings have a severe impact on the standard of their ultimate behaviour. As an example, it's

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parent's

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duty to teach their

kids

how to behave in a place according to the situation and nature, and

parents

should be role models

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it.

Such

contributions can develop a child's behavioural patterns from the outset.

On the other hand

, there is a bigger and more important role to play by the

teachers

as well. Once

kids

are enrolled

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schools at the ages of 5 or 6, they become part of a society or

they

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are introduced to a new community where it is totally strange to them. So it is

teachers

' duty to educate

children

on great qualities

such

as patience, love, sharing, respect and helping etc which

kids

might not get a chance to learn at home.

Moreover

, those experiences will help

kids

to shape their

lives

in a quality manner. In summary, today it is common to see many

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the standard of behaviour of

children

in public. While many blame

parents

for

this

nature, there is a significant portion of society thinks the fault is on

teachers

at schools. I believe

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this

is a responsibility of both parties where

parents

should teach better manners from

their

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birth at home while

teachers

should

further

develop it once they become part of the school culture. There should not be a boundary between the two stages

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but should continue throughout life in a collaborative manner to see better outcomes.