Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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food and drink

products

consist of

vastly

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measure of

sugar

, and

this

is one of the reasons for current illnesses. Some

people

believe that if

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sugar

made

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pricey

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sugar

consumption will decrease. Some

segment

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of society

believe

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that

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trend puts a positive impact on

sugar

consumption, I generally disagree with

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statement

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large

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extent. And I will elaborate

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in the following parts. Some

people

think that, if some

products

be

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expensive

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individuals can't afford to buy them and

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is a good way

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they can reduce to use

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that

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products

.

However

, I refuse to believe it because my opinion is completely different from

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view, I believe that

products

are the primary things that should

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exist in all homes.

furthermore

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everyone can afford them to buy.

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, I think the best way for

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issue is

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awareness of

people

. We can teach them with

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advertisements, helpful programs or something like

this

, to use less

sugar

, salt or whatever is for their physical health.

Also

, we can recommend to them a alternative suggestion, or we should broadcast the food pyramid to demonstrate the vitamins, carbohydrates, protein and etc, and let them

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decide for themselves.

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, we can provide

the

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some

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knowledgeable doctors

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they

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can set up to them a food schedule according to their weight and height or

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they

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daily routine. To sum up, after analyzing both sides of the argument, it is not hard to see, it is not fair that we make a decision

to

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people

Instead

of them, and they should choose with awareness for themselves. The only thing that we can do is enhance the surface of public consciousness.