With increasing populations and ever-growing urban centers, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved.
Due to a sharp rise
of
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in
population
all over the Add an article
the population
world
it leads to huge development rapidly in many Add a comma
,world
countries
. And there are also
changing
in land management, Change the form of the verb
changes
government
have to transform some natural resource for people
accommodation and economic growth in these Change noun form
people's
areas
.
First
of all, natural resource
,Fix the agreement mistake
resources
for instance
, forest
, Fix the agreement mistake
forests
water
bodies in Correct word choice
and water
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the city
city
should be protected by everyone because these are Fix the agreement mistake
cities
common
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a common
resource
for everybody in the Fix the agreement mistake
resources
countries
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country
especially
for citizens in Add the comma(s)
,especially
same
area. Because Change the article
the same
ecosystem
around their space could reflect how good of their life qualityCorrect article usage
the ecosystem
.
If cities are full Add a missing verb
is.
off
many resources, dwellers will find Replace the word
of
their
way to use and add Change the word
a
value
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the value
a value
of
all materials. And it can be their career to earn more money too. Another reason is beauty spots in town could become a landmark and support Change preposition
to
tourism
industry in Add an article
the tourism
countries
moreover
it also
rise up employment rate in cites
.
There are many Correct your spelling
cities
measure
that can apply to protect interesting places. Change to a plural noun
measures
However
, it is clear that we should use naturally
solutions to preventChange the adverb
natural
them
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apply
from
biodiversity loss if we treat them like a tourist Change preposition
apply
spot
. Fix the agreement mistake
spots
Firstly
, government
should increase more protected Add an article
the government
areas
and some activities should be banned in protect
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protected
areas
,for example
, hunting, fishing ,making
loud noise at night.Correct word choice
and making
Secondly
, after we have protected areas
and launch
some Wrong verb form
launched
rule
for Fix the agreement mistake
rules
travelers
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travellers
government
sector such
as forest
department should Correct article usage
the forest
limited
the number of Change the verb form
limit
tourist
per day and the time for Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
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an open
open
or Replace the word
opening
close
natural Replace the word
closing
spot
Fix the agreement mistake
spots
in
some Change preposition
during
period
of Fix the agreement mistake
periods
year
. By doing Add an article
the year
a year
this
even a
lot of people be around Correct word choice
though a
city
the ecosystem still healthy.
In conclusion, conservation protect Add an article
the city
areas
should be prioritized as main
issue of society with effective solutions from Change the article
the main
government
act about protected areas
. Because of economic growth in countries
, improvement in living for people, and biodiversity in areas
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