university shpould accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject
It is argued that educational
centers
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centres
such
as universities should accept equal
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an equal
the equal
number
of men and women students instead
of acquiring them due to their intellectual abilities. From my point of view, I completely agree with this
statement.
To begin
with, the major factor for this
supporting this
idea is gender
equality among all genders in whole
world. Change the article
the whole
For instance
, in developed countries
like the USA and Canada both of
genders Change preposition
apply
having
equal opportunities to show their perspectives in Wrong verb form
have
academic
sphere because they are accepting Add an article
the academic
similar
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a similar
the similar
number
of male and female scholars. This
case making
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makes
world
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the world
better
place for everyone despite Correct article usage
a better
of
their Change preposition
apply
gender
, race, nation, and other special qualities. However
, many developing countries
like Syria and Iraq are having protest
for females having high educational knowledge. But the way how other Fix the agreement mistake
protests
countries
trying
to have Wrong verb form
try
same
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a same
the same
number
of men and women students inspire other women to get good conditions to study.
Furthermore
, another reason for making equal gender
number
is Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
good
way to make workplaces more suitable for every person. Add an article
a good
For example
, in Kazakhstan
most of the universities of information technologies Add a comma
,Kazakhstan
consists
of male teachers. Change the verb form
consist
In addition
, the political members in most Turkish countries
are men, that providing
conservative thinking for Wrong verb form
provides
community
. So the solution Add an article
the community
for
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to
problem
is Add an article
the problem
a problem
making
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to make
similar
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a similar
the similar
number
of male and female workers like in the USA parliament administration to prove the fact that occupation doesn’t have a gender
.
To conclude, I strongly agree that gender
equality one
of the most important Add a missing verb
is one
thing
among academics. I think the idea of equal womankind and mankind should be spread Change to a plural noun
things
for
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to
a
public. It will increase Correct article usage
the
the
fair opportunities for everyone.Correct article usage
apply
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