You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, complain about the situation say why this is a problem and propose ways to reduce the noise
Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is with reference to the noise continuously generated from the new campus restaurant until midnight. Recently, it was noted that there is a problem with the new campus restaurant which frequently allows students to have musical events which leads
to Change the verb form
lead
generate
noise until midnight. Change the verb form
generating
Hence
, I would like you to pay your valuable attention to this
matter and do the needful to overcome it.
Please kindly note that, as university students, we have to complete many
academic Replace the quantifier
much
work
within a very short period of time and Change to a plural noun
works
as a result
of it, we have to wake up until midnight to complete them. Hence
, the noise from the canteen makes it difficult for us to focus on our academic work.
Therefore
, we would like it if you can inform this
matter canteen manager officially. Moreover
, please take the necessary steps to close the canteen by 10pm to avoid students gathering there unnecessarily. We believe these simple steps will bring solutions to the problem.
Looking forward to hearing a favourable response from you.
Yours faithfully,
Peter
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