You are living in a University residence, and you have a problem with the high levels of noise from a new campus restaurant which is open until midnight. Write a letter to the governor of the University. In your letter, complain about the situation say why this is a problem and propose ways to reduce the noise

Dear Sir or Madam,
This
is with reference to the noise continuously generated from the new campus restaurant until midnight. Recently, it was noted that there is a problem with the new campus restaurant which frequently allows students to have musical events which
leads
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to
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noise until midnight.
Hence
, I would like you to pay your valuable attention to
this
matter and do the needful to overcome it. Please kindly note that, as university students, we have to complete
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academic
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within a very short period of time and
as a result
of it, we have to wake up until midnight to complete them.
Hence
, the noise from the canteen makes it difficult for us to focus on our academic work.
Therefore
, we would like it if you can inform
this
matter canteen manager officially.
Moreover
, please take the necessary steps to close the canteen by 10pm to avoid students gathering there unnecessarily. We believe these simple steps will bring solutions to the problem. Looking forward to hearing a favourable response from you. Yours faithfully, Peter ST ID: 23104849
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