You wanted to start your own business. Write a letter to a friend Tell him/her about your business Explain why you think it is a good idea Ask him/her help for some help or advice
Hello John,
I hope you are doing well. I am so excited to share with you my new business plan.
Also
, I will need your help but firstly
, I want to share my vision. As you know, I have been working in a software company for seven years. But last
six months I always think about establishing my own company. I have job experience in coding and designing websites. Moreover
, according to
my old experiences, I will earn money more than what is the
current job. Correct pronoun usage
my
Also
, I will not need an office because I can work at home.
As a result
, I really want to set up my own job. However
, I need to trustworthy person like you. On the other hand
, you have experience with how can reach companies. If you consider this
please let me know. Otherwise
, I should try to find another person who can help me. I am waiting to hear from you whether you can help me or not.Submitted by ozanakbulutweb on
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task response
Ensure to clearly ask for the specific help or advice you need from your friend in the letter.
coherence and cohesion
Consider dividing the content into more clearly defined paragraphs to improve the organization and coherence of the letter.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,