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Nowadays, full-time university students tend to focus on their studying. Some people think it is essential for university students to be involved in other activities too. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#university #students #focus #people #activities
The person I’d like to talk about is someone I met when I studied in
United
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 States, he used to be my boss, and he is
also
 my mentor and my friend. At the end of 2015, after I graduated from the Academy of Art University in San Francisco, I moved to Los Angeles to take my chance. I was lucky enough to get a job right away. My very
first
 job was to be an onsite assistant editor in a film crew, it was a feature film called Andover, a really cliché sci-fi comedy about a genetic scientist who trying to clone his dead wife. That was where I met Oliver Mancebo, the protagonist of the story today, he is a Mexican American, with brown hair and black eye, very Mexican style. He was the DIT on set, that digital intermedia technician, we got to know each other very soon for work reasons. Because the editorial department where I worked
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was very close to the camera department where he was at. Long story short, I became
one
 of his men after the Andover project. He was very friendly and willing to help, he recommended me to several studios at
first
,
one
 of them was called
bulemhouse
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blue house
, a very famous horror movie studio because I was not in the union membership ,so it didn’t work out for me.
Then
 as his internship, we worked on several projects,
one
 of them was the AMC show called Preacher. I was the behind the scene editor of that show. Oliver is the
one
 who opens my door to the western world, he taught me a lot of American things, like music and culture. He was a typical American with a confident attitude and a creed of following the heart, and He
also
 encouraged and guided me to do so. That’s why When I came back to China after the internship I had the feeling that I am the king of the world. Yes, be positive, that’s what I think of him and what he taught me.
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