Some feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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present time, there is an argument in society to discuss the best method to reduce the

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rate. Some individuals claim that giving longer

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sentences is an effective solution to lower

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.

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other individuals suggest that

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is the better way. Both sides of these contrasting views will be analysed and

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with, the long period of sentence in

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could effectively reduce

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since it makes people afraid to commit crimes.

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, pickpocketing can lead to 10 years in

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. Citizens will carefully think before taking criminals.

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,

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will eventually reduce. Some countries like Singapore are the best

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of how to enforce uncompromising long

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terms in their laws which lead to peace and low

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rate

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in their society.

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, others think that

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should be the purpose of the justice system, not long-term punishment

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multiple reasons.

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,

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is a long-term solution for criminals as it provides educational and vocational training to build relevant skills needed for a smooth transition back into the workforce.

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,

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directly tackles some root causes of criminality, which are social problems.

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, the reason why innocent people become thieves might come from their poverty because they need to find money to survive but don’t have

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skills in the market.

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, they select the wrong path and method to become thieves. In summary, both views of

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argument are discussed.

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, I strongly believe that a combination of long

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and

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is the best solution to reduce the

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rate. Long

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time could stop people from

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as the consequences are high if they

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caught. Meanwhile, the government should have

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programs for prisoners to build their skills.