Some feel that punishment should focus more on rehabilitation instead of long prison terms. Others feel prison terms are important for social stability. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

At

this

present time, there is an argument in society to discuss the best method to reduce the

crime

rate. Some individuals claim that giving longer

prison

sentences is an effective solution to lower

crime

.

Whereas

other individuals suggest that

rehabilitation

is the better way. Both sides of these contrasting views will be analysed and

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To begin

with, the long period of sentence in

prison

could effectively reduce

crime

since it makes people afraid to commit crimes.

For example

, pickpocketing can lead to 10 years in

prison

. Citizens will carefully think before taking criminals.

Thus

,

crime

will eventually reduce. Some countries like Singapore are the best

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of how to enforce uncompromising long

prison

terms in their laws which lead to peace and low

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in their society.

In contrast

, others think that

rehabilitation

should be the purpose of the justice system, not long-term punishment

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multiple reasons.

Firstly

,

rehabilitation

is a long-term solution for criminals as it provides educational and vocational training to build relevant skills needed for a smooth transition back into the workforce.

In addition

,

rehabilitation

directly tackles some root causes of criminality, which are social problems.

For example

, the reason why innocent people become thieves might come from their poverty because they need to find money to survive but don’t have

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skills in the market.

Thus

, they select the wrong path and method to become thieves. In summary, both views of

this

argument are discussed.

However

, I strongly believe that a combination of long

prison

and

rehabilitation

is the best solution to reduce the

crime

rate. Long

prison

time could stop people from

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crime

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as the consequences are high if they

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caught. Meanwhile, the government should have

rehabilitation

programs for prisoners to build their skills.