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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Undoubtedly, with the rapid change of technology,
people
 who decide to complete
things
 instantly has been becoming more common and normal. Whereas some
people
 refer to
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things
 done instantly as a good development, others think
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 it as a drawback and a block of revolution. As for my perspective, I consider the negative
effect
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 the positive
one
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ones
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. An array of reasons may lead to why finishing
things
 instantly is a negative
effect
.
Firstly
,
people
 who have the ability to solve
the
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tasks persuade more effective and efficient of complete jobs. In the other words, those who want to save more time to get high outcomes or profit. It might be a good influence
of
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 development.
Furthermore
, sometimes completing
things
 instantly might make
people
 look down
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 services and think of
it
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 as low prices.
On the other hand
, as far as I am concerned.
Firstly
, only
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 on saving time might cause
people
 to forget to focus on details in the long term and it
also
 makes a number of mistakes which
people
 do not want it
happen
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. Take my experience
for example
. While I trying to solve the math examination as soon as possible, I make a lot of stupid mistakes
of
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 easy questions.
Therefore
, getting
things
 done instantly might decrease the
willing
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 of improving skills.
That is
, rather than
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trainning
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training
basic
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 skills
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intresting
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interesting
 in using fast ways to deal with instant servicing and getting information. In conclusion, I consider the negative
effect
 of getting
things
 done instantly to overwhelm the positive
effect
 of development due to it cause the frequency of stupid mistakes
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happen
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 more than before.
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