Over the past fifty years, international sports events such as Olympic games and world cup competition have played an increasing important role in our society. However, many people think such events are an enormous waste of money, time and effort. Do you agree?

There is no denying that since

sports

are done by

people

, these are part of our lives. From the past to nowadays

sports

continue to be developed by year

by

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. In

this

way, numerous competitions are made

such

as the Olympic

games

and world cups. While some

people

claim that these events are significant in the community, others consider that they are a massive waste of money, time and effort. I totally disagree, those competitions provide many opportunities not only for

people

but

also

countries

.

To begin

with, nowadays the events,

such

as volleyball, running, and football which are getting more popular are arranged by

sports

management. The goal is to determine the best country or team in the various

games

. Thanks to these kinds of

sports

, many

countries

can obtain foreign currency which is the most essential for development.

For instance

, countless fans who support their teams do shopping before the match, so they start to purchase something,

such

as carpets, souvenirs, and postcards

,

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and

also

eat traditional foods. Because of the fact that different currency enters the country, these currencies contribute to the development of

countries

.

In addition

, society who live in various

countries

can have opinions

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preconceptions about other

people

.

However

, when an event can be organized in divergent states, other teams' fans do not want to travel around there

first

.

Then

, they decided to come to

this

event, and they see that other

people

are not as bad as they think. Thanks to the competition, countless society is connected to each other well.

Therefore

, even if the

games

are finished, they would like to come again.

Consequently

, bad thoughts are broken effortlessly. In conclusion, even though

games

are thought

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a waste of time and money by

people

, because of

above

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these

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reasons, not only much money can be gained but

also

people

build good relationships together. I hope these sorts of events continue every time.