What are the advantages and disadvantages of social networking?
Social networking is a community which
bring
lots of benefits. Correct subject-verb agreement
brings
However
, every coin has 2 side
. Social networking Change to a plural noun
sides
also
has some risks.
There are plenty of advantages of social networking. It helps people
can contact with another easily. You can keep in touch with your friends including foreigners or family by
some social networking platforms Change preposition
through
such
as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, v.v. Easy contact is also
useful on
work or study. There are some online meeting apps which help us handle work effectively but no need to directly Change preposition
for
meeting
. Wrong verb form
meet
Furthermore
, social networking helps people
pass on news
. You can know the newest information about the war Add an article
the news
of
Ukraine and Russia Change preposition
between
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immediately
inmediately
by accessing Correct your spelling
immediately
to
online newspapers.
Change preposition
apply
However
, social networking also
has some disadvantages. Social networking can be Correct your spelling
addictive
adictive
Correct your spelling
addictive
especially
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,especially
in
young Change preposition
for
people
. Teenagers spend too much time on social networking because it has lots of attractive things. They can contact to
everyone anytime and anywhere while nobody knows Change preposition
apply
the
true identity of them. They think their online friends are friendly Change the word
their
those
they haven't met Change preposition
to those
them
yet. Online games Correct pronoun usage
apply
also
the reason why young Add a missing verb
are also
people
addict social
networking. Nowadays, there are many games with beautiful graphics and attractive Change preposition
to social
contents
that make teenagers spend hours on social networking.
In conclusion, using social networking has some advantages. Fix the agreement mistake
content
However
, there are also
some disadvantages effects to some people
, especially teenagers, so we need to be careful when using it.Submitted by shin.le1988 on
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