Some think that private companies should pay for cleaning up pollution, while others say it is the government’s responsibility. Discuss and state your own opinion.

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ambitious world, protecting our universe from pollution should be a priority. Despite who is responsible for it, everyone should be involved. Some people believe that non-government companies should assist in

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cleaning,

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others believe it is the government's role.

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both views have merit, In my opinion,eventually, it is the ministry's responsibility.

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, the forthcoming paragraphs will elaborate more on both views by using lucid examples.

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, private companies as well should be involved in picking up the mess.Indeed corruption is not only a governmental issue but it is

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caused by these private owners.

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, car factories in the

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decades, as per the latest statistics, are responsible for more than 10% of air corruption.

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, since they are in the same country, it is essential to help even if they are not involved, because in the end, not only it is affecting governmental factories, but on

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, it is affecting everyone. So, it is their responsibility as well, to work on decreasing the causes of

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aspect.

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, In every country, there is a ministry responsible for protecting the environment,

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, it is the authority's main liability.

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, some nations, have a ministry of health, which is responsible for protecting the residents from any diseases,

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as lung and cancer diseases,

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they are always setting up meetings to solve air pollution issues.

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, authorities

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to rely on green technology to decrease CO2 emissions which are considered to be the main cause of

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issue. Eventually, more solutions are being tested to

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in the near future.

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, despite the fact that private companies are sometimes not involved in causing

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issue, and paying taxes to the politics to solve these problems, they should be involved somehow, but, apart from that, since folks are paying taxes, it is the authorities main liability to figure out solutions to clean up the mess.

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Ensure to fully address the prompt by clearly stating and supporting your own opinion on the issue. Include a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion.

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The essay lacks a clear introduction and conclusion; consider providing a more structured and comprehensive overview of your arguments and opinion.

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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