Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many healthy problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, excessive consumption of sugary

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has become a critical

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which obviously leads to serious diseases

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as diabetes, high blood pressure and cancer. To overcome

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issue, some

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suggest the cost of

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and

drinks

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which contain

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percentage

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percentages

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of

sugar

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should be increased significantly to make those less popular among consumers. I totally agree with

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opinion since it may eventually mitigate the

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. Expensive goods are less popular among customers. In fact, most individuals are interested in buying less expensive/affordable

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and beverages.

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, most of the multinational

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which produce

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sugar

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drinks

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as Coca-Cola, Sprite, 7-up, etc usually make sure that their

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are much cheaper than other available

drinks

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. If the governments decide to impose

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tax

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taxes

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unhealthy food items, the manufacturing

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will have to increase the

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of the

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.

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, these sugary

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will be less popular among

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.

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, by increasing the

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of

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unhealthy snacks and

drinks

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, the authorities can indirectly influence manufacturers to switch to alternative

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products

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. Increased

price

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tags will become a massive/major

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for

companies

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as it results in less profit.

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, the

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may decide to produce items with less amount of

sugar

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.

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, the Singapore government has recently increased

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price

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the price

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of sugary

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.

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unhealthy

foods

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are being replaced by healthy

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such

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as fresh fruit juices. In conclusion, higher

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consumption has become a critical issue in many nations owing to the increase in health problems among

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. One of the main solutions to tackle

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problem

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would be implementing

higher

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a higher

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tax

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taxes

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on these

foods

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. I believe

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will encourage

people

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to choose alternative

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and

companies

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to produce healthy

foods

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.