some people think that museum should be enjoyable places to attract young people, while others think the purpose of museum should be educated.discuss both view and give opinion.

Nowadays,

museums

are

essential

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part of human-being. It helps to bind

people

with roots. Here, the debate is that

museums

should use only for

education

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purpose

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;

however

,

other

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think that amusement is essential for

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tourism

turism

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attrection

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attraction

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.

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essay intends to discuss both perspectives. I, personally side with

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view.

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with, there

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number

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of

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reasons

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reasons

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people

who opine that

museum

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use

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only as a form of education.

Firstly

, in

museum

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, information regarding culture and tradition is provided

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that

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that

need to be

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.

Furthermore

, some

people

; especially history students, visit

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in order to learn different things. If any kind of

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amusement

amusment

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amusement

is provided here,

then

people

feel distracted and cannot gain

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abundance

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of

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knowledge

knowladge

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knowledge

.

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, they may feel

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with

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information.

For instance

, nowadays,

museums

start to ban any sort of devices.

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,

people

can enjoy

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without any barriers.

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, those who opine that

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entertainment

entertaiment

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entertainment

is important.

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, if

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provides both

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as well as information,

then

people

, who find

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boring

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boaring

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boring

to visit

museum

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, may visit it as a form of picnic

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.

Moreover

,

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various places prefer

to

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which provide both

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facilities

facalities

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facilities

as they are getting more

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benefits

benifits

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same

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amount of money

likewise

;

museum

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used

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for only study

purpose

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.

As a result

, undoubtabally,

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revenue

revenve

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museums

,where these facilities are

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available

avilable

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available

, is high in comparison with others. To sum up,

although

, it is

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beneficial

benificial

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beneficial

to use

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museum

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for purpose of education, providing

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both

bith

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both

aspects may helpful

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fir

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not only

visitors

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but

also

for revenue of sales.