Nowadays genetically modified food is widespread all over the world. While proponents of GM crops ensure that these foods are safe for human consumption and help to increase food supplies, others argue that their effects on health have not been studied long enough. Describe pros and cons of genetically modified foods.

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individuals assume that the non-GMOs food
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healthier to absorb
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"GMO" products have a better cost value
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with non-GMOs. In general, most people agree that
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crops have good prices for farmers to grow, for suppliers to sell and for consumers to buy.
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merits due to increasing economic
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food will bring up more cost to complete the fresh crops due to their qualified element and new farming techniques. There are many researchers
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safety
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consuming GM crops for meals because they have inefficiently adverse bacteria to attack human health, according to
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Australian Science Group from St. Patek Hospitals, in 2019,
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GM group can
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following genes in a long run.
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group, which guarantees its beneficial factor for human
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due to its qualification. It is absolutely easy to compare the drawback between the non-bacteria apple and the
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, in my point of view, these two groups of production should take more time to balance the crucial factors, especially ensure their merits and
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arrange affordable prices for farmers, suppliers, and buyers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • genetically modified (GM)
  • crop efficiency
  • nutritional content
  • environmental benefits
  • economic advantages
  • health effects
  • biodiversity
  • ethical issues
  • agribusiness
  • pest-resistant
  • herbicide-tolerant
  • yield
  • biotechnology
  • sustainability
  • food security
  • vitamin-fortified
  • cross-breeding
  • patent
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