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floating

house

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was designed by a team of engineers from Portugal. Its delivery can be ordered from anywhere in the world. Several people can stay afloat in

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house

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for a week at the same time. It can float on a river or on a lake and is especially popular in the Netherlands.

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is appropriate for permanent residence.

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place for sunbathing and

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in to

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water

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. In case of need,

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house

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interior can be transformed

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studio

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house

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is a place for vacations and

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big

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family with 3

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and 2 bathrooms. The team of creators work on

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design

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the floating

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concept, which is expected to be released on market soon.

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rotating residence from

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age was built 30 years ago

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but still looks

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futuristic. In

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house

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of 130 square meters, there are two floors, upper level which

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tones

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is located above the pool, which is situated on

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floor and spins on its axis following the Sun. The hydraulic elevator is controlled by an 80's remote control. Still perfectly

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its functions, less energy is required to move the

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is cool in summer and warm in winter.

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neighbors

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were not glad

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weird accommodation, but now they are using its tourist-attractiveness

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small

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Czech city. The creator and owner of the

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was

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awarded the Green Oscar award for his invention and an eco-car that runs on liquefied gas.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

272 words

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