The government should ban smoking in all public places even though this would restrict some other people’s freedom?Do you agree or disagree?

This
floating
house
was designed by a team of engineers from Portugal. Its delivery can be ordered from anywhere in the world. Several people can stay afloat in
such
a
house
for a week at the same time. It can float on a river or on a lake and is especially popular in the Netherlands.
This
house
is appropriate for permanent residence.
Upper
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deck might be
beautiful
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place for sunbathing and
jumps
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in to
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water
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. In case of need,
this
house
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interior can be transformed
to
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studio
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.
This
house
is a place for vacations and
also
suits for
big
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family with 3
bedroom
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and 2 bathrooms. The team of creators work on
new
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design
of
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the floating
house
concept, which is expected to be released on market soon.
This
rotating residence from
rocketry
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age was built 30 years ago
,
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but still looks
like
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futuristic. In
house
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the house
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of 130 square meters, there are two floors, upper level which
weights
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7
tones
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is located above the pool, which is situated on
ground
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floor and spins on its axis following the Sun. The hydraulic elevator is controlled by an 80's remote control. Still perfectly
performing
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its functions, less energy is required to move the
house
,
it
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is cool in summer and warm in winter.
Initially
,
neighbors
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were not glad
to
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this
weird accommodation, but now they are using its tourist-attractiveness
to
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small
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Czech city. The creator and owner of the
house
was
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awarded the Green Oscar award for his invention and an eco-car that runs on liquefied gas.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prohibit
  • legislate
  • secondhand smoke
  • public health
  • respiratory
  • cardiovascular diseases
  • enforce
  • legislation
  • public policy
  • autonomy
  • compromise
  • healthcare burden
  • passive smoking
  • civic responsibility
  • health hazard
  • involuntary exposure
  • liberties
  • deterrent
  • cessation
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