In recent years, it is considered to
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demandFix the agreement mistake
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of
children
is very essential as it shows love and
careChange the verb form
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toward them.
Although
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fulfilling every demand can cause of careless attitude
ofChange preposition
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children
. According to my point of view, there should be
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and
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forChange preposition
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bringing up
children
otherwise
it will lead them to be a selfish
personalityFix the agreement mistake
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.
It is needless to say that in
this
competitive era everyone is running to upbringing
children
with their best, but the notion of providing everything should
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wrong. It is
natureCorrect article usage
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of
children
to desire
things
which they don’t have,
afterCorrect word choice
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having those
things
they don’t concern about
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.
For instance
, some
children
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increasingly
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to get play station because they are impressed by their
fellowsChange to a genitive case
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gadgets, after having play stations they lose interest in
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and demand
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mobile phones.
Consequently
, they are impressed by their surroundings and try to get each and every luxury which sometimes their parents can’t afford. Rather than valuing
things
,
children
are learning to love materialistic
things
.
On the other hand
, giving every luxury to
children
can damage their
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. Because it is human nature if he gets everything without effort he never values its importance.
In addition
to it, there should be a reward system for
children
so that they behave well to get something. Bringing up
children
is not a good task for parents, to exemplify, it is noticed that
children
of financially affluent families are more indulged in social evils as
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to
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families and the reason behind
this
ethical gap is their financial status, their parents provide them according to their demands. Shortly, societies
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never run for materialistic
things
are no place other than heaven to live.
To sum up, providing everything to
children
might be not good to some extent as
children
think it is their right to
fulfillChange the spelling
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demands,
additionally
, they should teach to do
effortAdd an article
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for getting something so that they can lead a happy and prosperous life
onChange preposition
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their own.