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Some say that it would be better if the majority of employees worked from home instead of travelling to a workplace every day. Do you think the advantages of working from home outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, some say that lots of employees feel better
to
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work
 from
home
 rather than travelling
any
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work
 sector.
Although
 there are some benefits to
home
 working,
but
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i
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 believe it does have more disadvantages in comparison with
advantages
. Admittedly, the two main
advantages
 of
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time
 and travelling
cost
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.
Firstly
, many workers prefer
home
working
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 which
provide
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 them
a
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great opportunity to do their
work
 within a particular
time
.They can set up
work
 according to their
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time
Tim
tim
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time
.
As a
result
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 it helps them to save
their
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apply
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time
.
In addition
, if
people
work
 at
home
,they do not need to go
one
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 place to another for
work
.
For instance
,
people
 who
work
 as a salesman,
they
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apply
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 need to go
different
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to different
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 places to
sale
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sell
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 their
product
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products
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.For
this
reason
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 they spend lots of money.
However
,
who
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those who
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 start
online
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an online
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business
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businesses
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 to
sale
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sell
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 their
manufactures
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manufacturers
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 to seat own
couch
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couches
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,
they
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apply
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can save their travelling cost easily.
Nevertheless
, despite the
advantages
 above,
i
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I
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 think
people
 face some serious demerits if they decide to
work
 to seat at
home
.
First
 of
all
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,all
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people
 start to lead sedentary
lifestyle
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lifestyles
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who
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and
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work
 from
home
.There are no
time
limit
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limits
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 or pressure to complete their
work
.As a consequence,they may put their
work
 for tomorrow, which means they remain dormant.Another negative aspect is that seating
all
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time
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their time
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 at
home
 for
work
 means they fail to connect
face-to-face
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in face-to-face
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 conversation. Physical communication is essential for every job sector,without it
people
 are not able to understand their
work
.And it may prove the major obstacle to achieving
goal
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the goal
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. To conclude, even though there
are
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 basic
favor
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 for
home
 working.It
seem
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 to me that the disadvantages outweigh the
advantages
.
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