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Advertising is nowadays often targets children or products like fast food and toys. Many people believe this is bad for children and their families. Do you agree or disagree, give reasons with examples.

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Advertising is the means by which we broadcast our product in an eye-catching way to attract buyers to get them. A recent trend has been recognised that advertising is recently targeting the age group of 4 years and above
weather
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whether
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in products they like e.g toys
our
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or
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 stuff they may be eating like junk
food
. In a recent
study
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 it has been recognised problems between
children
 and parents have increased as
children
's interests have
been deviated
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 nowadays to the trending stuff that
are
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is
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 being advertised
for
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apply
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and the child may want the same sort of toy he has but just because it has a different and fascinating packaging.
This
 is causing over demand from
youngesters
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youngsters
 to adults as well as it may
also
 be growing a sense of
selfish
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 in the child. Fast
food
 has
also
 been of interest to most
children
 recently as so much income has been put
on
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into
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 how to make the advertisement attractive to
children
.
This
 is
also
 creating a sense of debate between them and their guardians as it isn't healthy to be on fast
food
 and the young ones do like to stick to a certain sort of meal when they love it. It might as well be increasing the level of obesity among the
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youngsters
youngesters
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youngsters
 as junk
food
 doesn't have equal percentages of calories. I strongly agree that advertisements are causing an indirect sense of influence on
children
's likes which
are
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is
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 opposite to
parents
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parents'
parent's
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 will.
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