More and more people prefer to buy readymade food from restaurants or convenience stores instead of cooking for themselves What are the advantages and disadvantages of this

In

this

age and

time

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people wanted to purchase instant

food

from

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supermarkets

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super markets

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supermarkets

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or hotels rather than preparing

food

on their own. The positive outcomes of the aforementioned concept are that they could spend more

time

with their family and focus on their work, whereas the negative sides are that they might gain

over

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weight and end up with severe health problems. One benefit of

the

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buying readymade

food

is people can spend their valuable

time

with their loved ones. Nowadays with the increase in inflation around the world, both husband and wife use to work round the clock,

instead

of spending the remaining

time

in

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the kitchen

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kitchen

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they can use

this

as their family

time

.

Moreover

, they can concentrate more on their work or business so that they can improve their revenues.

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survey published

from

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the TIMES OF INDA indicates that employees who

does

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not spend their valuable

time

in

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on

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household chores are the better performers. On the other side,

firstly

people who consume fast

food

regularly are prone to

obese

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, they can put up their weight easily because

of

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the quality of

food

is definitely not good.

Additionally

,

the

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instant

food

is vulnerable to

cause

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diseases. An article which is published in the magazine for diabetes indicated that persons who are on fast

food

for

continuous

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a continuous

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week or two are showed higher glucose levels than the ones who eat

healthy

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a healthy

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diet

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. To conclude,

this

essay has shown the positive outcomes of spending valuable

time

with the members of the family and

increase

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an increase

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in productivity for

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an employer

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employer

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rather than cooking and

also

discussed the negative sides like getting obese and deteriorating their own health by consuming

lot

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a lot

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of readymade stuff.